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Keir Editing and Writing Services

Gay and MM Fiction Author Coaching Services

Working Together towards Your Ideal Queer Story
“Before working with you, I had no idea where to begin editing my manuscript.
It needs a complete overhaul, but now knowing what works and what doesn’t work will greatly help me make revisions.”
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J.J Graham, MM Fiction Author
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“Working with you helped me get a clearer picture of what my manuscript needs in order to get it ready for shopping around.
I found your strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions concise and helpful as I make my way through the rewrite process.”
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Edisol Dotson, Gay Fiction Author
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“You helped me better understand primary and secondary characters and the need to create three dimensional characters of both types.”

Jim Nichols, Gay Fiction Author

Story Coaching Support for Authors of Gay Fiction

What is stopping you from writing your ideal story?

Structural barriers?

Weโ€™d meet to discuss big-picture concerns, outlining, and planning. Itโ€™s not about changing your writing process but reflecting on whatโ€™s keeping you stuck.
e.g., openings, endings, cliffhangers, pacing, ensuring high stakes, romance and crime beatsย 

Craft-based writing limitations?

Iโ€™d work with you on sections, providing examples of how to revise, and then letting you have a go.

e.g., creating compelling characters through GMC, ensuring action beats heighten rather than intrude on tension and conflict, writing sex scenes, or improving craft and sentences

Practical challenges?

Weโ€™d set accountability goals and deadlines. Perhaps youโ€™ve picked up habits or practices that hinder your progressโ€”coaching can help!

e.g., struggling to focus on revisions, getting stuck revising, or meeting deadlines

Letโ€™s close the gap and move you closer to your ideal gay story.

Am I the right gay story coach for you?

I combine coaching skills and my decade+ in education to create a space where you can grow and narrow the gap between your current manuscript and ideal story. Iโ€™ve done the hard work and learned from the best; Masters in Education, CELTA, UCLA Extension, Club Ed, and the EFA.

I use my coaching, writing, and education background to help authors get unstuck and elevate their words and writing skills. During our discovery call and sessions, weโ€™ll identify specific craft-based areas for improvement.

“His manuscript evaluation was detailed and beautifully laid out, which made it easy to follow and understand.

Not only did he help with the novel I was currently writing, but he ensured I walked away with a foundation for outlining every book I write in the future.”ย ย 

Nicky James

MM Romance Authorย 

I’ll definitely be working with Sam again in the future, and I highly recommend his services for authors who are looking to make their books the best they can be.ย 

Kit Erikson

Gay Fiction Authorย 

“After the first read through, Sam sent overall feedback, in-line notes, and a chapter-by-chapter breakdown.

Sam did a lot of work, while making sure to stick to the vision I had for my plot and characters and really took his time to comb through the story.”

K.C. Adams

MM Thriller Authorย 

Levels of coaching I offer.

Services are not set in stone, and my ultimate goal is to find a process that works towards getting you unstuck and closer to publishing your ideal gay story.

Let me know how I can help you!ย 

During the drafting stages:

Writing Process Coaching

After you have a finished draft:

Revision Coaching

Outlining or brainstorming coaching is best for those needing some support to get started.

Romance beats, character arcs, or getting those mystery clues stacked up so they unfold to a satisfying finish. This would occur early on when you have ideas or a rough outline. Iโ€™d review your notes and through questions weโ€™d ensure that you are ready to finish that first draft.

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Once you have a completed manuscript, I offer a manuscript evaluation and then we meet to review as you work through revisions.

By setting goals and working on barriers and writing skills, Iโ€™ll help you reach your ideal story goal. Supporting you to develop as a writer is important because seeking help is not a weaknessโ€”itโ€™s a sign you are invested in producing the best manuscript possible.

Crime Novel Coaching

Quiet Coaching (Email-Based Support)

Mystery, thrillers, hardboiled, and noir, to name a few, mean complex plots, clues to keep track of, and outlining can be a great idea.

My 30+ years of reading crime novels help to set you up for success.

Coaching via email and manuscript-based feedback only.

No Zoom calls or need to meet at specific times.

This works fabulously for those who prefer to DIY or dislike calls but would also like some support.

Author Coaching Pricing

All coaching begins with an Ideal Story Session and includes Four Zoom Calls

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Example project and prices below:

60,000-word draft completed.

Goals: You gain the tools and confidence to fully revise your first draft.

Manuscript is ready to move to the final line and copy-edit stage.

Two-Step
Revision Success
Package

Three-Step
Revision Success
Package

Step 1:

Manuscript Evaluation or Full Developmental Edit

Feedback in an editorial letter or added to the manuscript.

Step 2:

Coaching Calls to Guide Revisions

Weekly or biweekly discussions focused on goals, reality, options, and next steps before and during the revision process.

From $1,200

Step 1:

Manuscript Evaluation

Feedback in an editorial letter.

Step 2:

Coaching Calls to Guide Revisions

Weekly or biweekly discussions focused on goals, reality, options, and next steps before and during the revision process.

The author revises based on the feedback and returns the manuscript to the editor.

Step 3:

Full Developmental Edit

All suggestions are incorporated into the manuscript.

From $3,000

Ideal Story Sessions

Do you want fast feedback on your first chapter or a rapid report on your outline?

An Ideal Story Session might be just the solution.

This is a no-cost way to speak with me on Zoom and ask all your questions.ย 

Check the link below for more information.

“Honestly, Sam exceeded my expectations. I’ve had a couple sessions which I paid in the past with another writing coach and compared to that experience, Sam was thorough, honest, and constructive. You could tell he actually studied the manuscript to provide suggestions or questions to challenge the author.”

Ferni Escoto, Gay Fiction Authorย 

“Sam was receptive to that and along with putting together the manuscript evaluation with care and compassion, heโ€™s continued to be patient, understanding, and encouraging every step of the way with revisions, our emails, and our coaching calls.
Iโ€™ve had such a positive experience with Sam Iโ€™d work with him on more of my books in a heartbeat.”

Author VT, Gay Fiction Author

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“Samย gave really clear, constructive, feedback that worked perfectly with my writing style and has made a huge difference in getting my novel ready for publication. I canโ€™t recommend working with Sam enough!”

Sophie Snow, Queer Fiction Author